All Annotations of Sweet Confusion « Grandma’s Apple Pie[Preview]

saved by2 people, first byClay Burell on 2008-05-06, last byStephanie Cho on 2008-05-06

• and cool
  • on 2008-05-06 04:39:57 Cburell
    k
• I want to write about something that carries a significant purpose and be effective at the same time.
  • on 2008-05-06 04:40:06 Cburell
    k
• It does show my interest for food and sweets, bu
  • on 2008-05-06 04:42:22 Cburell
    I'm noticing a complete absence of non-literal (figurative) language. Maybe that's why there's so little voice? Or one reason, anyway.
• one of the biggest problem that people have
  • on 2008-05-06 04:42:36 Cburell
    grammar
• how food, a ‘must-have’ in our life to be so threatening and harmful to human beings.
  • on 2008-05-06 04:43:12 Cburell
    grammar
• disease/illness.
  • on 2008-05-06 04:42:54 Cburell
    style: choose one. this looks clunky.
• symbolize intelligence
  • on 2008-05-06 04:43:46 Cburell
    grammar: say this out loud, and you'll see it doesn't sound right. make it sound like it would if you were saying it to somebody.
• ice cake which symbolizes abundance in food.
  • on 2008-05-06 04:44:14 Cburell
    grammar: difference b/w "which" and "that" clauses.
• Couple of my favourite shows
  • on 2008-05-06 04:44:34 Cburell
    Style: "A couple," not "Couple"
• the question is ‘will it be interesting?’.
  • on 2008-05-06 04:44:46 Cburell
    punctuation