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This link has been bookmarked by 2 people . It was first bookmarked on 06 May 2008, by Clay Burell.
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06 May 08
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Donuts, Starbucks, Coffee Bean
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Add Sticky Noteand cool
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Add Sticky NoteI want to write about something that carries a significant purpose and be effective at the same time.
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Add Sticky NoteIt does show my interest for food and sweets, bu
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I'm noticing a complete absence of non-literal (figurative) language. Maybe that's why there's so little voice? Or one reason, anyway.
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the writing itself doesn’t seem to have a clear voice.
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‘pop’
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Add Sticky Noteone of the biggest problem that people have
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grammar
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Add Sticky Notedisease/illness.
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style: choose one. this looks clunky.
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Add Sticky Notehow food, a ‘must-have’ in our life to be so threatening and harmful to human beings.
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grammar
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Add Sticky Notesymbolize intelligence
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grammar: say this out loud, and you'll see it doesn't sound right. make it sound like it would if you were saying it to somebody.
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Add Sticky Noteice cake which symbolizes abundance in food.
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grammar: difference b/w "which" and "that" clauses.
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like a big lotus
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Add Sticky NoteCouple of my favourite shows
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Style: "A couple," not "Couple"
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Add Sticky Notethe question is ‘will it be interesting?’.
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punctuation
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