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22 Aug 06
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Add Sticky NoteResearch from http://www.vifamily.ca/cft/media/media.htm In
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Add Sticky Notelack in value does not cause teenages to be addicted to computer games. it is because they don't have self - discipline .if they have it they will not get addicted
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- Huh? Isn't self-discipline a value? Please clarify. - Evidence?
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Add Sticky NoteStudents who become addicted to games causes them to lose their focus which causes them to escape reality which finally causes falling out of school.
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- Hmm...Is this the cause or effect of gaming addition?
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Add Sticky Notelack of value doesn't cause teenages to be addicted to computer games.if the teenage have self-discipline they would not be addicted.
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- But isn't self-discipline a value? Please clarify.
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Add Sticky NoteIt was discovered that dopamine production in the brain doubles during video game play, which causes , the increase of the psychoactive chemical was roughly the same as when a person is injected with amphetamines or the attention-deficit disorder drug, Ritalin, which finally causes gaming addiction
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Add Sticky Notewhat causes the brain to release this substance , how does the game have something to do with this and which part of the game or hoe does the game affect that
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Add Sticky NotePsychological needs is not the cause of players getting addicted to online games. It is the lack of values makes them addicted.
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This evidences taken from http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2006/05/26/AR2006052601960.html suuported the claim that i put as unable to pass tough university entrance exams and under intense pressure from his parents to study harder, 20-year-old Kim Myung gradually retreated to the one place where he could still feel invincible -- the virtual world of electronic games.
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- This is an evidence. Where should you post this? But it does contain the reason. Interpret this evidence and describe the reason using the appropriate sentence openers.
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parents who does not discipline their children causes lack of discipline which causes them to neglect their studies and spend their time playing computer games which finally causes them to be addicted to computer games.
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Add Sticky Noteresult of his gaming tactics causes teenages to be addicted to video games.The psychological cycle of substance addiction and other maladaptive behaviors can be applied to video games as well. A person playing a video game feels an emotional high, commonly known as an adrenaline rush, as a result of his gaming tactics (8). He then plays the game more and pushes his physical and psychological limits in order to experience the emotional high. Eventually, he will again reach a level that stimulates the production of adrenaline. The cycle may continue until it leads to an unhealthy level of interaction with video games, which some professionals may label video game addiction. Even famous psychological effects such as the sunk cost fallacy can influence the addictive cycle. This fallacy occurs when a person feels compelled to continue performing a certain behavior because he has previously invested time in the behavior and does not want to feel as though his investment was wasted (9). Similarly, Dr. Timothy Miller, a clinical psychologist, states that many video game players may feel that they have wasted their efforts if they do not reach the next goal in a game, which may lead to additional time spent playing the game that the person otherwise would have spent in a more constructive task .
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Add Sticky Notethe game design causes the players to try as hard as they can to beat other players or try to beat other players top scores
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- You are confusing claim and reason. Are you saying that the game design is the cause? How it leads to addiction by way of causing players to try as hard as they can constitute the reason. Post this under reason using the appropriate sentence openers.
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Add Sticky NoteAllowing people to be escape reality and provide conquerable causes during the diiferent games make people to be addicted.
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